Rapunzel Writing!


Posted by class5 | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on 16-01-2015

Wow! Look at these fantastic stories written in Big Write!!
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Once upon a time there was a girl with long golden hair. A witch locked her in a tower with no door. One day a prince came riding by, he heard Rapunzels’s lovely singing. The prince watched how the witch climbed up Rapunzel’s hair and the prince called out ‘Rapunzel, Rapunzel let down your hair.’
Rapunzel made a mistake and said ‘why are you much heavier than the prince?’ The witch cut off her hair. The next day the prince came and yelled ‘Rapunzel, Rapunzel let down your hair.’ Then the prince saw the angry witch. ‘Away’ the witch cried. The prince was blind for two years, he heard lovely singing ‘Rapunzel’ he cried. Rapunzel’s tear of joy helped the prince get better. As all stories end they went to the prince’s palace and they all lived happily ever after.

What fantastic stories!!!!

This is fantastic writing Class 5! I’m really impressed with your hard work, especially how you have used speech marks in your writing. Well done!

Those are SUPER stories. Well done all!

thank you i liket riting the story. what was yore favrat part?

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